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The Eclipse Mage [Chapter 1 is OUT] » Devlog
24 days ago by Bart Games
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Thank you so much to everyone who tried The Eclipse Mage!

If you’ve played Chapter 1, I’d love to hear what you think about it — your feedback will help me make Chapter 2 even better!

Also, with the game’s release, I updated some CG screenshots to make the page more engaging :)

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leogrl1919 days ago(+1)

Finally got a chance to play!! I liked it! :D

The art is distinctive and lovely, the premise was well delivered (not too much that I felt WEIGHED DOWN by lore I didn't understand): Just enough to give an idea of the state of this world and why things are what they are. Also felt like the first chapter did a great job of setting up future events and giving you a taste of the cast of characters; I wasn't expecting a family-type situation (which auto gives MC more to lose). 

Le Prisoner is very much a fun mystery I'm interested in finding more about. His reveal was amazing and I appreciated the extent of torture wasn't held back; he's clearly been through terrible, terrible things and you can't help wondering the why.... The end of the chap only seems to confirm ish is about ta get REALEST -- and honestly? THANK YOU for giving a main who's not staying ignorant, but realizing things are about to change/she needs to stay Ready.

Looking forward to the next, darling! ❤️

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Bart Games18 days ago(+1)

Oooowwwwww, thank you so much!

I’ve started to develop a bit of a guilty pleasure for reading detailed and positive (lol) feedback :D

And about the MC not staying ignorant: YES! Thank you! Another one of my guilty pleasures is the "Damsel not in Distress" archetype, so you can definitely expect a lot of girl boss moments (in a good way).
After all, SHE is the main character! ;)

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leogrl1917 days ago(+1)

I mean - I'll Absolutely give constructive feedback if I feel it warranted (in a respectful way, oc), as a writer/creative myself, since it truly helps, but this first chappie was a 'no notes' for me. There was nothing in it that felt blatantly 'off' or incongruent or oof. Just a solid + fabulous start, like I mentioned. Be PROUD 🎉 

And - YASSSS, MC QUEEN~ We love a 'Damsel in DETERMINED'. I'm glad that you don't fall to that trope as it's as tired as it is Overplayed. Can't wait to see all her 'Girl Boss' moments in action (she had a few in ch. 1!!) -- I already knew from playing your earlier works this would be epic; so zero doubt you'll nail this and give us such a great time!

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